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In last class, Rab told us the bad points of our essay. There are a lot of new things that I have to be careful. And I noticed that I made lots of mistakes in my book review. For example, I could not put the good title, and maybe I used phrasal verbs. I did not know that phrasal verbs are not appropriate for academic writing. I tend to use phrasal verbs many times, so I should be careful of it. In addition, I learned that I cannot start two sentences with same words, for instance, "He went to school. He sat on his chair." Rab said it is like sentences made by a child. And we should make a longer sentence. I want to improve my writing using his advice.