10/19

Today Rab told us some bad points of our essays. Maybe I made some mistakes in my essay, so I have to learn from it. He said to us that he points out bad points of our writing and we can learn from it. It is quite natural, but I tend to think my writing is terrible when my teacher point out bad points. I will stop thinking like this because I can improve my writing by it. I really want to develop my writing skills, so I want to write more and more without being afraid of mistakes.